Rugby is the most definitive sport in new zealand. Some of the best playeys in the world that play rugby are from new zealand there for if they had be here sicnes a kid then they would be used to playing rugby getting hurt and have really good skills. When you think about new zealand you will think about our rugby teams they are allways in the news for somthing they have done even if its just a little game it will be in the news rugby is the most played sport in new zealand. Just the outer day I was in adington and there way a game on you seen all the people where the team that they seporte tops on there was people eveywhere the traffic was bad after the game you seen all the people half were happy and all the others were sad as there team lost. there for I beleve that it is the most definitive sport in new zealand.
Hello Isaac my name is Jesse this is some good work but maybe you could make them into some shorter sentences I like it how you highlighted the oreo it make you writing look way much better maybe next time you could add a introduction on what you were working on but overall this was some good work. Is there anything you think you could do better.
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