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Friday, June 15, 2018

The Honest truth

we had a book week But it goes my drivers or one of my writing selected about a book for If you don't panic like things about cancer because it as a kid I'm not going to spoil it I think you should read it this is my side of the story much I wrote myself as the kids could mark I think you'd like it because I actually put If it into it I hope I can have some feedback Hope you enjoy bye.
Hi my name is Mark. I am going to run away from home I am takeing my dog and same colles and
same food. I had been planning to go to the Mountains so today I am going to the Mountains with my dog. Last night I  went online and purchased a train ticket the next day the dog and I went to the Station Right before we got to the station we went down an alley so I put my job into my bag and then we haven't done it to get both and ask for a bus ticket so I went around the corner and but my cout in the bin and my hat. So I had seen the train Can I put my train to it and a window into the train I want to the back of the train and sait down Can you put my hand in my bag and petrol my dog Dogs names bow  I heard someone say all the board and then I figured shuttle when it started to roll But I had to catch my back with you they always pitch dark really any lights everywhere As I was walking down the road with my dog but we were just keep hearing noises and seeing a lot of people I think they were from those people because all I have is in either sleeping or coughing your lungs out and we started his amazing so I got really scared. Meaning of back home my mum got home. As the house was empty so my mum ring up my best friend and I wasn't there my best friend said so then my work Mum when the police If you don't really get that word when they cute little kids good luck but once my mum's started telling them about my sickness Bayside adori and then they sure they not that I looked and I got really worried so they headed down to the station and asked if I would have been there once a week and she could buy some the other office I went and checked with the booth but the big man was still sitting watching this magazines and evil people but when he saw the police officer he wouldn't think that bored after that.

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