I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Isaac
ReplyDeleteYou read in a nice clear and loud voice. I can hear where you added in some inflection or emotion particularly when the characters were speaking.
I wonder if you were to do this again, what you could cast on the screen to make it more interesting, rather than just Google?
You're doing great with these tasks. I challenge you to select a Green level story next week.
- Miss Birtch