In class we have been doing work on how to write sentences. The sentences are a lot better so they look nice and so we know how to write a good sentence. We can get people to look at our whole blog post. Here it is I hope you like it.
One morning he woke up. Then he decided to go fishing so he grabbed his gear. Quickly, he jumped in the Ute and sped away. Straight away he got a fish hooked! While he was bringing the fish in, he was trying to get his net. He happily let the fish go.
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