I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well done Isaac! It is nice to see you publishing on your blog. This is a very important message about staying safe on devices. I am sure that the adult in your cartoon is going to check out the source of the 'bad video' and help make sure that mistake does not happen again. Will you be posting more cartoons with characters that you create? I would love to see that.
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Well done Isaac! It is nice to see you publishing on your blog. This is a very important message about staying safe on devices. I am sure that the adult in your cartoon is going to check out the source of the 'bad video' and help make sure that mistake does not happen again. Will you be posting more cartoons with characters that you create? I would love to see that.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.