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Monday, November 27, 2017

A&P Shw

My class what to the A&P Show. I put in a group with Hunter Liam and my dad So we walking and we were waiting for the rest of the class. So why we were waiting we went to the horses and I went to the boat and the boats were quite amazing Because they were looking really cool And so here we were we went into the show and we started looking around then we go to the jet skis the jet skis had a lot of different type trailers with different type jetskis on it and there was this amazing oldest car So we stood and looked at it so but then we moved on and then we went to spa pools deals Asana I made out of wood which was really like him cool because you could go with it and it was it came off I got a free stuff in it.m


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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 28, 2017 at 12:36 PM

    Hi there I'm Angelo and my buddy Thomas. we are a students in room 4 and my friend is from room 3 at Drummond School. We really like how you talked about the Jet Skis. Here is a tip for your peace
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    I give your writing 3.5 stars
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  2. AnonymousMarch 9, 2018 at 10:07 AM

    hi iam am mark i go to pcs school and i am a year 5
    i like the way you post on your blog

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