I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
A schooner boat is a sailing boat it has 4 white sails it is big a long it looks really strong and will last in the salt water if i was on the boat i think i would see a lot of rope some sails and waves and a stering wheel.
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Hi Isaac
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing about the Schooner. I wonder if next time you can aim for a few more sentences in your paragraph.
Do you think 10 minutes for our Do Now is enough time, or should we try 15 minutes?
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