This week we had to make a simile poem and it had I am as big or other things on it but then we had to make our own poem and here is mine! Hope you enjoy my poem!
I am as hot as a dog
Quick as a Eze
Slow as a Mr M
Small as a Mr M
Large as a Eze
Happy as a Isaac
Sad as a dog
Nice as a Isaac
Mean as a Blake
Hot as a dog
Busy as a Isaac
Put it all together and you’ve got Isaac
Interesting similes Isaac. I like the way you are thinking of positive comparisons. All of the Blakes that I know are very kind. Great to see your work up on your blog. Please remember to keep it all positive.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
Hi Isaac i like how you have made simile poem .
ReplyDeleteGreat silmile poem isaac i like to see that you are uesing lots more words keep up the good work from mum.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Blake and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like your simile poem and the way you added at the end, put it all together and you get Issac because it shows that all that you have said is about you. It made me think of what a nice person you must be. Have you thought about adding what makes you as hot as a dog? Do you like dogs?
ReplyDeleteHi ther my name is like this isaac
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is liam and I am a student in room 5 at yaldhurst School. I really like your simile poem and the way you added at the end, put it all together and you get Issac because it shows that all that you have said is about you. It made me think of what a nice person y ou must be. Have you thought about adding what makes you as hot as a dog? Do you like dogs?
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is liam and I am a student in room 5 at yaldhurst School. I really like your simile poem and the way you added at the end, put it all together and you get Issac because it shows that all that you have said is about you. It made me think of what a nice person you must be. Have you thought about adding what makes you as hot as a dog? Do you like dogs?
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is liam and I am a student in room 5 at yaldhurst School. I really like your simile poem and the way you added at the end, put it all together and you get Issac because it shows that all that you have said is about you. It made me think of what a nice person you must be. Have you thought about adding what makes you as hot as a dog? Do you like dogs?