Hi today we were working on our haiku poems here is my poem. This poem is about the creation of the eel. The reason we are loaning about haiku poems is because it is part of the art class.
rough current water
slimy eel was fast moving
fast slick eel swimming
Hi Isaac
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you took on feedback and we were able to work together to get your Haiku to the right length.
You've been really focused on your blogging today and have made a record number of posts! Keep up this positive learning attitude. Perhaps next time you could think of adding a photo to go with your poem.
- Miss Birtch