I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Isaac you have made a pretty cool slide of your camp. I read that Honor liked it too. Where there any other photos that could show more of what we did on camp?
Hi Isaac my name is Sanele and I am a year 6 boy at st Bernadette's I liked how you put awesome and cool pictures.Something you can work on is just to put some labels to tell me what it is and what happened and maybe put some more detail and I look forward to see your next camp memories.
Hello Isaac W, I am Gustan from St Bernadette's School. I liked all of the cool photos in your Camp Memories. Next time could you put some writing with your photos so we know where you went and what you did. I look forward to see your next camp memories.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Isaac you have made a pretty cool slide of your camp. I read that Honor liked it too. Where there any other photos that could show more of what we did on camp?
ReplyDeletekia orana im maz from owairaka primary school i like your camp memories i thought it was epic that yous all done archery and the photos are epic 2
ReplyDeleteHi Isaac my name is Sanele and I am a year 6 boy at st Bernadette's I liked how you put awesome and cool pictures.Something you can work on is just to put some labels to tell me what it is and what happened and maybe put some more detail and I look forward to see your next camp memories.
ReplyDeleteHello Isaac W, I am Gustan from St Bernadette's School.
ReplyDeleteI liked all of the cool photos in your Camp Memories. Next time could you put some writing with your photos so we know where you went and what you did. I look forward to see your next camp memories.