I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Weather is rain. Weather is thunder. Weather is lightning and storms. Weather can make tress fall down in the wind. Weather can make hail and snow and a whole bunch of hard, hard hail.
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A very informative piece of writing Isaac. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Isaac. Great to see you blogging. Great writing young man. Bad weather is a good reason to stay inside and read a book.
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