i am back

For the last 2 weeks, we have been doing recount stories.
I didn't read that story on last Friday of a kid that went with grandad's and he hated it yesterday
we had you doing a presentation my teacher said that was my Improvement session I've got a whole
bunch more work and I've used more paragraphs and better words than just I am you because As I
have learned more words I've got a piece of paper that shows me he has been just I am you because
bikes from things from time connectives to a lot of others. Everything learning especially myself And
words that I have never really used before Is open getting more floor with all my writing especially for
recounts I'm staying to get used to having to write to you because I never used to be able to be good at
writing recount I only use to write fake novel stories and I remember one time when I was in a classroom
I did 5 pages. of writing and that was when I was 7 I believe but oh well besides that and I've been
getting better at my recount writing I've been doing a lot more work on it once I did a recounted story and it
was like 3102 words and it took me 3 days on voice typing to do I've got a lot more fluent was doing
recoun.t as I thought I was doing work Sunday I am you and I can only do about 50 to 100 words Nono
we can I can do anywhere from about 300 to 672 words As I've been getting better with my writing with
recounts I've learned that you shouldn't be always just putting imu2 because as you need to put more
the word from punctuation to a lot of other stuff from an even paragraph the end. I feel comfortable about all this week that I have finished and I hope that I can get more work done

sport

In-room me for the last 2 weeks we started one week before school term ended and we've done it

and we got athletics I think I'm going to be able to go into songs this week maybe shot put and maybe this kiss me I don't think of people under or high jump cause I can only get to a metre sometimes and the school record is a metre 5 and I'm trying to get me to 5 but it's going to be hard so I feel like I'm going to be able to get in the spring as is not many Essex boys that are going to be doing it and I reckon that we are looking for about the ATM I don't know about the shift leader but I'm hoping to get in for the ATM and I'm hoping to get in for shot put you know why it's because I'm trying to get myself into the 3D kind of stuff getting closer and closer to athletics I've been training a lot the Hydra is being a challenging part for me cuz it's been more fail and miss fail a mess and I'm never getting it right really it feels like but I think I'm going to definitely get them Fresh Prince last year I came in for place and that was when I had about 15 other boys does racing against I feel like I did pretty well but I still don't say anything but I reckon this year will be my year as yours only for year 6 boys and tell them I don't think you're going to really race but they're probably going to get them for something but maybe not but I feel like I'm going to get in for shot put for Sprint as I will probably get second or third as my best friend are going to either get one of my best friends is going to definitely getting first and then my other friend ever going to come see me or I'm going to 10:30 or he won't come said so I'm pretty excited about it as your school does do it I hope your school does as it is a very funny thing I'm really good at cross-country and I got into zones for this year but I I would have made zones this year for it but I couldn't because they don't want to see my group in but last year I got in and I came out of the 153 students that we're running I came in and Anna 53 I came in 53rd place listen to my blog by

Yaldhurst car museum

Today Hot chocolate and brownie because we were moving stuff in the last day of term and we've got a whole bunch of photos of  us on the fire engines and old car It was really fun get see all of the old car’s and fire enegerns Every got to go to the museum we got to go on a whole bunch of different vehicles and we got chocolate brownies and we got hot chocolate it was fun seeing all the different vehicles that was here we put on five minutes and around we saw all the old fire engine and all the staff at least have to wear back in the day the fire engines didn't have seatbelts it was also a really old car that was there and I was very cool and we all sessions and the only reason why we got to go down to the museum was because I principle but I have to do something on the last day of term so we got to go down and have a half plaster fun and we'll never know what was expecting to do but we got to do a whole bunch of stuff from getting to see with no vehicles were getting food to being able to hop on vehicles

Statistics

This week will be learning about Statistics and I do not like Statistics but I think I'm doing pretty good I'm learning how to do Statistics. Today I did 3 sheets I was doing really good it a different way than what I already had started to do it as well Thank you for listening to my blog.

Refugee

Last two terms we have been reading a book called Refugee and it's been a very good book It has been a very good book and I give it a 4 out of 5. Something where bad  and some of it was good if your yard to read it well take a will because there is 500 pages and it is a story about 3 famliey and they leave the home town

Post test narrative

For the last 3 week’s has been doing narrative writing and my pretest was alright and I guess I didn't have everything down with it and it was a bit tricky and I didn't really like it start but now we've been reading through the ice palace and Saturday realized like what happens with it all like cuz at first I thought narrative writing was totally different to what it really was and then forgot a lot better with no she is what I started off work and I did 216 words a really quality like writing but the first pre-tested I did was 1026 words and that was a bit hard for me to always keep editing . But this one feels a lot better and I hope you enjoy it bye.

Walking through the door’s walking into zone 67 Hearing gunshots getting fired Across the room having the best of time bomb bom Loud gunshots getting fired around hearing people scream all the people come running out. Someone had been shot with a rifle shot was fired. what can we do? Call  111 and get Ambulance and police ok on the phone where are we? zone 67 ok hi can get Ambulance and police at zone 67 ok Ambulance and police come to your location. more shots fired in front of the building get out now before we get shot. We all need to be safe.

Ambulance and police get to then seen and more shots go off get in now get the gun off him and get him in same cuffs ok boss get him now. Boom boom more shots fired Man down how you or him-him ok hope into the building  Break the door down. Boom the door’s fill over. Got him in cuff’s ok put him in the van taking him to jail boom the door on the van Smashed closed on him. Take him away boys get his gun and make sure it is not lodde . can I  interview you and have your stories on what happened yes you can What time did you get there 1.00 pm can you place lave the Senn sen I have Interviewed you and get a good nite slept and can you place come to court in 3 weeks ok. It is on Monday.the 23 of October.

pre test

A few weeks ago and we we-we did it to your school the narrative prettiest and I felt pretty nervous about doing it but then after a few weeks of doing some work on it I'm saying if you're a lot keener on doing it and not so black weird about trying to do nice and pretty and test it's really helped me a lot learning about like expression is also learning about your story that we're in which is called the ice palace I'm a family to suggest reading it but it was really weird doing and I feel free to use when I haven't done one before. and I'm running to get as much feedback as I can work so I know a bit more about it have you done a narrative pre test?I'm sorry about how long this whole story is going to be but it's a very good one cuz it's I guess it kind of relates back to a person in my family but it does it's not the same as story and names and all that but the same Army camp and I think that you might have had maybe someone in the army but putting that all do I sign out about this guy and he was in the Burnham Burnham military camp Christchurch and I was like it's pretty exciting to write and you know some of it was a bit like a key kind of like because I wasn't used to it because it could be real but like I guess some of my stuff that Hello my name is Tim and I've decided to join the army for one reason to serve my country And I'm 21 years old and I've decided to join the army so I can serve  my country for a while I'm joining the a part of Army and I'm just going to be a soldier on the ground that's got a AK-47 hopefully or automatic rifle. I joined the army in 2005 when I first arrived I was pretty nervous but then I call you got used to it but then once. I got there I was really scared to go in Because I didn't like the look of it It was like it was going to fall down just right then I heard one crashed. I didn't want to go in But then I realised it was just gun firing so the first arrived I had all my military Gear come to me and I also got my own cabin with my awesome other people and we need to make sure we  repolished every single day and everything looks so good and it was no turning back now. So once I got used to it I started unpacking all my gear and put it in the wardrobes or my chest virtually / closet so I had a bit of time before we had to meet everyone so I started to meet a few people dressed in it so what I did cos I just want straight over to that to my other job mate and just said it to introduce myself they were pretty fun as well so I don't know what to worry about so my boots a polished and all my clothes are ready.I had to get changed into the military uniform it was pretty weird not being able getting told went to poop when we went to eat it was really weird at start then I slowly got used to it again because I was in the army before but I didn't get through because my health has to unhealthy and I was only 18 at the time but now I've been training every single day running. and running and I've lost 32 kg It was weird at first but I new surroundings a bit even though the first time they've looked at me and I guess and they told me that I wouldn't make it so hopefully it won't be like this next time this time so I went out and we all got bit by a leader they do it was a very weird day today we had to special tactics we had courses a lot of courses but today we'll just doing training wage in pe and cause did I mention. I also got PE uniforms yeah if we do so we went for a run for about 2 hours then we got back we had a few courses like how to manually fix again her and then after that it was dinner time it was a good start at first but I got used to it pretty fast and so did my other colleagues that. I was working with now it was pretty weird being in the army for a again but I can handle it I believe day 3 I woke up at 7 a.m. cuz that's when we got woken up it was a weird day it was quite cold outside but you know what we did today we did swimming in the pool but I was happy because it was a hot pool and it had heaters in it so that was nice so they have on hot water so I knew what it was like but then at first I put it on cold water so it first so they put it back on hot water it was quite warm. Day for almost a week is gone I was writing a letter back to my family and it was a very weird part of life because I wasn't used to it but I think I've got my Platoon quite grumpy with me because I nearly how would you put it pushed him into the water by accident and so it was hard because I was just writing back to my family then that day we had to go have breakfast. then after that we were doing more PE but this time we're doing a flog and it wasn't so nice but when we got back we had another training and we were doing we were having a drive the military vehicles because we were going on a camping trip we will learn how to drive them because and then Nick not tomorrow but then day after that we're going on a trip camping so I got in the front driver's seat and started driving around I've got used to it so we had dinner and went back to bed day 5 I woke up and I had breakfast it was weird because we only had porridge and it wasn't the nicest but today we had a special on training with guns and grenades so we didn't have a fence and we are next to Wild Horses by accident almost shot one but putting all that aside it was very fun today because we didn't have much to do it then doing this and we had to load up my truck cause tomorrow we're going camping we're taking 3 tracks and I want to drive this falling forward taking for 3GS with all the way here and 1/2 everyone to go on so it's going to be a weird 4 days over camping but I think we're going to get used to it so today it's going to be a weird day cuz we just finished. up doing a gun training so if we back go to get a different uniform and start to pack up the truck we've got tents and food and mri's which MRI stand for meals ready to eat so I'm pretty excited but tomorrow we've got to wake up at 5 so it's not going to be the funnest but oh well I think I managed tonight I've got to Courtney pack my bag get everything ready so what would I so we both up the trucks and then we all headed back to a bunch to do it get them up to room inspection and pack our bags day 6 it was a weird day we were going camping up in the Marlborough sounds but we were lucky because I returned to that we've got a day or up there so we took a few fishing rods. I'm pretty excited but anyway we kind of want a well it doesn't matter cause that's such as fun as well but I'm in the army to become a soldier and to fight for my country Is it seems I'm going to be excited but as I woke up even more we had to start driving driving about 280 ks so it was about a three hour trip just in car so we had about 5 hour check in with couldn't go as fast as a car and so one by one for the tracks came along we got there at 10 and we lived at 7 which is pretty good well we left about 6 but the time that we got out was about 7 so it was pretty fun but putting all this aside or still got to set up a whole camp but what was lucky was we didn't have to do it all at once but we had some of the strictest leaders with us oh well like it was still really fun to be there so we see at camp and then about 22 hours so then we had dinner and went back to sleep and I tense day 7 it was weird but today we had nothing on it was a free day so me and some of the frick my friends that were going to become in them I mean we went fishing just for a bit but then I'm a fishing with so people in China invade us so when peaceful day went to one bad day so we all red and grab the guns and Fullerton said open fire so we all sat at them and then we never realised but it was one of our guys but we don't know why because he no one was missing so before we could realise we started shooting but then we realised that he was getting held hostage so we gotta snipers out and then we shut the hostage person that's holding them hostage right now head boom he's gone now it was a scary moment for the bus but what was lucky is no one died except for the person that was holding people plus it was wondering criminal so I've got a pretty piece with a dinner he just hope that doesn't happen so instruction said well will have the free day  today the to be Continued.